New Dark Chemistry cover + which teaser blurb do you like better?

Dark Chemistry

He’s her worst enemy–and he’s got a drug that controls her. Now he can do his worst. Dark Chemistry. Because evil can take the shape of love.

I admit it. I made a mistake.

When I first released Dark Chemisty, I let myself be seduced by the cliche that “sex sells.”

It does, of course–but it was a bad idea for this book. Dark Chemistry is a plot-driven novel, but it’s also got a bit of concept to it. Putting a woman in a bustier on the cover didn’t really reflect the experience I’m trying to create with this novel.

(This business takes a lot of work to figure out…)

Anyway, I’m working through all my titles to do new covers, and my hunt led me to Jennie Rawlings, who agreed to do a new cover for Dark Chemistry–and I LOVE what she did.

As I said on Twitter, I finally feel like my book has a face that fits :)

But now I have a question and you can help. I’ve got two different drafts of teaser copy, one for the Kindle version, one for the print version.

Which do you like best?

Here they are — and please scroll down to the survey below so you can let me know your choice. Thank you!!!

KINDLE VERSION

She’s been drugged.

She doesn’t know.

It feels so good. Like love.

But it’s a trick. He plans to control her. Rob her. Maybe kill her.

A web of evil.

Will Haley realize that her feelings are not her TRUE feelings?

Does Donavon have the strength left to fight for the woman he loves?

Will the two of them uncover Gerad’s plot to use powerful synthetic pheromones to enslave the world?

And even if they do – can they stop it?

 

PRINT VERSION

If Haley Dubose wants to inherit her father’s fortune, she has no choice. She has to leave sunny Southern California for a little backwater town in Upstate New York, and run a chemical manufacturing company he founded — for two whole years.

But Haley soon wishes her only problems were of the spoiled-rich-girl variety.

She finds herself entangled in a web of evil, spun by men who use powerful, synthetic chemicals to manipulate people.

They can drive their enemies insane.

They can manipulate them sexually.

They can even kill.

And they are preparing to enslave the world.

 

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