{"id":4255,"date":"2018-01-15T18:33:23","date_gmt":"2018-01-15T23:33:23","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/?p=4255"},"modified":"2020-01-02T16:55:34","modified_gmt":"2020-01-02T21:55:34","slug":"in-which-i-confess-ive-been-completely-rethinking-my-latest-draft-novel","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/in-which-i-confess-ive-been-completely-rethinking-my-latest-draft-novel\/","title":{"rendered":"In which I confess: I&#8217;ve been completely rethinking my latest draft novel"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>Yeah, I&#8217;ve been busy doing other things as well. Work stuff.<\/p>\n<p>But I haven&#8217;t stopped working on current novel. It&#8217;s just that the work has been going on &#8220;underground.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Here&#8217;s the quick version.<\/p>\n<p>As a writer, I operate on a kind of cusp. I aspire to writing novels that are well-plotted, because to me action is what entertains. But the questions that most interest me personally &#8212; and that (naturally) I want to explore with my books &#8212; operate at a non-surface level.<\/p>\n<p>Let&#8217;s make this concrete. Suppose you have a heroine being chased by a monster. The action is all about her attempts to elude, outsmart, or fight her pursuer. And you need all that ducking and weaving and swordplay and making-of-alliances. It&#8217;s what pulls us into stories.<\/p>\n<p>But no monster worth the name is &#8220;just&#8221; a physical threat. What makes monsters truly scary is that they evoke an existential threat. A monster that is &#8220;just&#8221; a monster is a cartoon. What really frightens us are things like suffering and death &#8212; things the monster represents.<\/p>\n<p>Pick up that thread and follow it a bit and we find even more interesting fears. For me, for example, the fear of death is paired closely with the fear of &#8220;as if I never was.&#8221; All these memories, these experiences, the people who love me and think about me! Will that really all be wiped out one day, lost forever? Horrible!<\/p>\n<p>Another closely related fear is the fear of losing control. This comes into play when people start thinking of &#8220;how&#8221; they would prefer to die. Compare &#8220;peacefully, in bed, surrounded by loved ones&#8221; with having your life snatched away from you unexpectedly. No chance to say good-byes, wrap up loose ends, settle back and take some part in the process (&#8220;more morphine please, nurse.&#8221;)<\/p>\n<p>What&#8217;s scarier?<\/p>\n<p>In <a href=\"https:\/\/amzn.to\/2FcyUAM\"><em>The Philosophy of Horror,<\/em> Noel Carroll<\/a> writes that &#8220;art-horror&#8221; works by imbuing monsters with qualities that invoke dread, disgust, and &#8220;the idea that unavowed, unknown and perhaps concealed and inexplicable forces rule the universe.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Scary!<\/p>\n<p>And that&#8217;s just one dimension of our heroine + monster scenario. A novel has so many layers, subplots, relationships. Ultimately they must all work together, and on that same under-the-surface level.<\/p>\n<p>The novels that I truly love &#8211;that I find transporting &#8212; operate almost as if the novel itself is a psyche. I&#8217;m thinking of novels like <em><a href=\"https:\/\/amzn.to\/35fTYkj\">The Book of Ebenezer LePage<\/a><\/em> (GB Edwards). Everything about a novel like that seems to be part of a single psychic entity.<\/p>\n<p>It&#8217;s not something you&#8217;re naturally conscious of (although people who write about GB Edwards&#8217; book are likely to observe that the island shapes the characters, somehow. &#8220;You couldn&#8217;t write the same book if you set it on the mainland&#8221; etc.) But on an unconscious level, there&#8217;s a wholeness that transcends the categories we normally think of: character, setting, plot, conflict.<\/p>\n<p>Okay, I said this post would be &#8220;the quick version&#8221; of what&#8217;s going on with my current novel.<\/p>\n<p>So let me wrap it up by saying that I&#8217;ve re-titled it. It&#8217;s not Third, any more. The title is now Parthenon.Which I adore.<\/p>\n<p>And it went from being basically &#8220;done&#8221; to being a WIP.<\/p>\n<p>And it&#8217;s given me a constant headache as I have wrestled with how to show you, my presumed reader, something that I *know* in my bones about this place I&#8217;m writing about, which is fictional and yet not. I want to take you to this place, and show it to you, so that when you return to &#8220;the real world&#8221; you understand something you didn&#8217;t before.<\/p>\n<p>That&#8217;s a tall order. I probably can&#8217;t pull it off. But I&#8217;m going to try :)<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Yeah, I&#8217;ve been busy doing other things as well. Work stuff. But I haven&#8217;t stopped working on current novel. It&#8217;s just that the work has been going on &#8220;underground.&#8221; Here&#8217;s the quick version. 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