{"id":3188,"date":"2012-01-02T08:30:28","date_gmt":"2012-01-02T13:30:28","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/?p=3188"},"modified":"2020-01-04T09:42:02","modified_gmt":"2020-01-04T14:42:02","slug":"i-am-editing-loose-dog","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/i-am-editing-loose-dog\/","title":{"rendered":"I am editing. Loose Dog."},"content":{"rendered":"<p>So I&#8217;ve got this novel, you see.<\/p>\n<p>I love the concept. It&#8217;s a first person novel, narrated by a woman who is an animal control officer.<\/p>\n<p>And she&#8217;s got problems.<\/p>\n<p>Man problems, for starters. Her ex-fiance has shown back up in her life. And here, she thought she was completely over him.<\/p>\n<p>Before you know it, she also ends up with dog problems &#8212; particularly when she stumbles on evidence of a dog fighting ring that is out of her official jurisdiction but very much on her conscience.<\/p>\n<p>I first drafted <em>Loose Dog<\/em> several years ago. Shopped it to exactly one agent, who requested a full, but eventually passed on it.<\/p>\n<p>I should probably have kept pushing, but instead I set it aside and wrote <em>Libby<\/em>, and a bit after that <em>Can Job<\/em>.<\/p>\n<p>And you know what? That was the right decision. Because what that one agent told me is that <em>Loose Dog<\/em> was well-written but needed work on pacing. So I focused on improving my plotting, and as you can see from my Amazon reviews, plotting is one of the things readers like about my novels.<\/p>\n<p>So now I&#8217;m back to <em>Loose Dog<\/em>, and my first New Year&#8217;s resolution for 2012 is to tweak it until I absolutely love it.<\/p>\n<p>Get ready, world :-)<\/p>\n<p>UPDATE: <a href=\"https:\/\/amzn.to\/2QltycK\">Out now&#8230;<\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>So I&#8217;ve got this novel, you see. I love the concept. It&#8217;s a first person novel, narrated by a woman who is an animal control officer. And she&#8217;s got problems. Man problems, for starters. Her ex-fiance has shown back up &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/i-am-editing-loose-dog\/\">Continue reading <span class=\"meta-nav\">&rarr;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[9,240,3],"tags":[1748,498,339,336,360,1092,241],"class_list":["post-3188","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-books","category-e-publishing","category-writing","tag-amediting","tag-amwriting","tag-editing","tag-indie-author","tag-loose-dogs","tag-the-writing-process","tag-writing-2"],"aioseo_notices":[],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3188","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=3188"}],"version-history":[{"count":4,"href":"https:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3188\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":6504,"href":"https:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/3188\/revisions\/6504"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=3188"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=3188"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/kirstenmortensen.com\/index.php\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=3188"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}