Tweaking the Loose Dogs teaser copy

Loose Dogs by Kirsten MortensenI actually like doing this — but at the same time it’s a bit harrowing.

Need to get it right. Need to come up with copy that makes people really really want to read the book.

Here’s where it is right now:

Animal Control Officer Paige Newbury doesn’t know what’s worse.

Her man problems.

Or her dog problems.

She opens a package and finds The Ring—which means the guy she can’t get over is about to walk back into her life.

Then she stumbles on evidence of a criminal dog fighting ring—which means a gorgeous pit bull she tried to save is doomed to suffer . . . or maybe even die.

She’s sure she can seal the deal with her boyfriend with a little help from sexy lawyer Larry Crawford.

But she’ll soon need another scheme—this time, to save her life.

Loose Dogs.

Unconventional romance.

Thrilling twist.

What do you think?

Would you buy it?

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2 Responses to Tweaking the Loose Dogs teaser copy

  1. This may be enough:

    Loose Dogs. Unconventional romance. Thrilling twist.

    (A Hemingway six-word story by itself.)

  2. Kirsten says:

    Yes, it may be!!!

    Thanks for the comment, David :-)

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